"No, Jason. If you write like this, you won't even pass the school's preliminary review, let alone participate in the city-level competition." The head teacher frowned and looked at Jason's Arbor Day essay. "In fact, you only need to describe the process of planting trees that day. There is no need to add so many embellishments."
Grace had heard from her Chinese teacher a long time ago that Jason's writing style was unconventional and that his skills needed to be honed. However, she had not expected that Jason would not follow the Basic Law when writing about his personal experiences, making the originally ordinary tree planting activity full of magical colors.
Jason stood in front of his desk, still full of confidence, "Teacher, I understand, I understand. Art comes from life and is higher than life. I have already stood on the top of Mount Everest. It is lonely up there."
Grace couldn't help but sneer. Seeing that the study committee member of her class had just asked other teachers a question, she called him over.
"Jason, please ask Logan for advice on how to revise your article to a satisfactory standard."
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